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Post by TheBlackMoon Tue Oct 12, 2010 12:21 pm

Spar
Ronan vs Lass

Lass: So why did you challenge me?

Ronan: I just wanted to see how strong you've gotten.

Lass: Oh well.. umm

Ronan: I want you to fight me as if you were going to kill me. - charges at Lass -

Lass: Whoa your serious about this, I guess I gotta get serious too. - charges at Ronan -

Ronan: Heh. - Jumps over Lass and uses Psychic Force -

-Lass smiles as he dodges the skill and throws a few kunai's-

-Ronan deflects the kunai's and swings his sword at Lass -

-Lass Jumps on the blade and strikes Ronan -

Ronan: Ow – In a whimpering voice - that really hurt – falls to his knees -

Lass: Sorry are you ok? - walks over to Ronan to comfort him -

Ronan: FOOL!! - Strikes the ground and yells – KANAVAN STRIKE!!

Lass: Thought so – Lass makes some hand signs -

-Magical Blades come out of the ground and one hits Lass -

- As one of the blades hits Lass it is replaced with a log and Lass appears in a tree -

Ronan: I see that you've gotten faster – looks at the nearby tree -

Lass: Heh, and you've gotten better at acting, but this fight if far from over – jumps out of the tree -

Ronan: Good, I was worried that my attack was too much for you to handle.

-Lass runs at Ronan with an incredible speed and hits Ronan twice then knocks him in the air and kicks him down-

-Ronan quickly recovers and charges Lass, strikes him 3 times and uses Divine Slash

-Lass slowly gets up with this dark, and evil look on his face -

Ronan: Huh, Lass? Whats wrong? Lass? LASS!! Wake up!.... crap, I just wanted to test his strength.

-Lass deeply breaths as he gets covered in a dark aura-

Ronan: T-that dark aura ( Remembers the past when he was controlled by that dark power )

Lass: Hehehehehehe

Ronan: L-Lass?

Lass: Ahahahahaha!!!

Ronan: Aw crap, I thought we got rid of that dark energy.

-A puff of dust appears where Lass was standing and appears behind Ronan -

Ronan: His Speed is Inhuman!

-Lass Punches Ronan in the back sending him flying-

Ronan: * cough * His power is incredible, I barely had time to react to it.

Lass: This, this power.....

Ronan: LASS, YOU NEED TO WAKE UP!!

Lass: I am awake, I have full control over this power

Ronan: Well there is no need to go all out then.

Lass: But you said yourself attack as if you were trying to kill.

Ronan: If I really meant that I would be using my tyrifing wouldn't I?

Lass: - Deeply sighs and release the dark power -

Ronan: Whatever this little battle is done, that one punch felt like my back broke or something.

Lass: Oh wow, then you must be weak then, not me.

Ronan: If I could match your speed then I would have stood a chance.

Lass: Whatever – walks back to town -

Ronan: Hmph...

THE END

By: Cordel Francis A.K.A TheBlackMoon or Semiazas


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Post by TheBlackMoon Tue Oct 12, 2010 12:23 pm

I know its short I made it in class so not much thought was put into it
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Post by TheBlackMoon Thu Oct 14, 2010 12:19 pm

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Ryan vs Sieghart ( Guy with a sword or Zeke )

-Sieghart walks by the front gate of the village -

Ryan: Hmm? - remembers his face from when he was found in his bed – HEY YOU! - Runs after that guy -

Guy with a sword(Sieghart): Hm? - Looks back to see a orange haired person running at him – Oh, I remember you, thanks for letting me use your bed, but it was very rude of you to kick me out while I was sleeping.

Ryan: First of all it wasn't your bed, it was mine.

Guy with a sword(Sieghart): That doesn't mean you throw me out side. You could have just put me in another bed...

Ryan: I wasn't thinking properly at the time, I was very tired and I just wanted to sleep.

Guy with a sword(Sieghart): Can we sit or something my legs are getting tired.

Ryan: Really? Uhh – Looks for a bench in the village – Over here – points to where the bench is and starts heading for it -

Guy with a sword(Sieghart): Awsome – Follows Ryan -

Ryan: I'm a little curious.

Guy with a sword(Sieghart): About what?

Ryan: About who you are.

Guy with a sword(Sieghart): You to huh? Whats so important about my identity?

Ryan: Well usually when people meet they introduce themselves.

Guy with a sword(Sieghart): Ok... - Thinks of a fake name – My name is Zeke... ya it's Zeke

Ryan: So uhh Zeke, can you tell me why you hold your sword backwards?

Zeke(Sieghart): Because this is how I trained to use it. Why?

Ryan: I just never seen someone wield their weapon backwards before.

Zeke(Sieghart): Oh,hmm wanna get something to eat? I'm starving.

Ryan: Of course! - Runs off to his cabin and back to the bench with food -

Zeke(Sieghart): Wow that was fast.

Ryan: He he, ok let's eat! - goes for the food but gets stopped by Zeke – Huh?

Zeke(Sieghart): Where are your manners? The guest always gets 1st choice. - takes the food that he wants -

Ryan: W-what?? - looks at the remaining food – There's barely anything left for me!! - eats the food that was left over -

Zeke(Sieghart): You should have packed more food – burbs -

-Ryan whimpers -

Zeke(Sieghart): Well that was good, but I gotta go now.

Ryan's stomach growls -

Zeke(Sieghart): Thanks uhh... whats your name?

- Ryan mumbles – Ryan...

Zeke(Sieghart): Huh? I didn't hear you, you need to speak louder.

Ryan: I said my name is Ryan, now if you don't want to get destroyed for not leaving me any food, you better leave...NOW!

Zeke(Sieghart): Okay there Ryan no need to freak out over some food – leans back against the village gate -

Ryan falls to his knees and pulls out his storm blades and connects them to make a storm pike -

Zeke(Sieghart): I'm waiting.. - gives Ryan a twisted smile -

-Ryan lunges at Zeke with his storm pike out getting ready to stab him -

Zeke(Sieghart): So easy – dodges and watches Ryan crash into the wall - Ha ha, c'mon your going to have to do better than that if your going to hit me.

-The dust cloud blows away, Zeke see's Ryan charging him and yelling “ FLASH IMPACT! ” and behind him are bursts of energy which explode after a few seconds -

Zeke(Sieghart): Interesting but you still... huh?

-Ryan stops moving and growls at Zeke

Zeke(Sieghart): Why do you hate me so much? Like you can easily get more food at the kitchen, like I don't see what the big deal is.

-Energy starts to gather around Ryan causing dust to kick up and
surrounds him as he uncontrollably transforms into Magnus Dan-

Zeke(Sieghart): Wha-what the hell?!?? WHY ARE YOU GETTING MAD OVER FOOD?! - groans – I don't really want to fight but if this is the situation I have no choice but to – charges at the monster -

-Magnus Dan growls and stomps the ground with a powerful force that destroys the ground around him making rocks fly up, soon he punches one of the rocks, destroying it and sending the debris at Zeke-

Zeke(Sieghart): Whoa – Dodges the debris then looks up to find the monster right in his face – crap... - the monster headbutts him sending him back a bit, then uses “ Mach Blow ” which sends Zeke in the air. Dan jumps at him and attempts to slam him into the ground but the attack was blocked and Zeke jumps off of Dan's head -

Zeke(Sieghart): Hmm, he's pretty fast and strong but no where near me! - Dives down at Dan with an incredible speed and a crushing force. He misses making a crater in the ground and a giant cloud of dust and dirt -

-Dan raises his blade and strikes the ground making a long crack in the ground to where Zeke was. Then an explosion happens and a large purple wave emerges from the dust cloud heading straight for Dan -

-Dan takes his stance and blocks the attack with his own ( Blinding Cross )-

The power between these two attack were so great that they canceled each other out.

Zeke(Sieghart): Ugh I'm tired of this, see ya –He waves goodbye to his opponent and walks away -

Magnus Dan stands there watching Zeke walk away. He raises his blade and screams “ LORD OF VALHALLA ”

-Zeke turns around – Zeke(Sieghart): Hmm? Lord Of Valhalla you say?

A large portal appears above Dan's head and a Demon Emerges from it flying above Dan's head and waits for a command.

Dan swings his blade forward indicating to attack, the demon flaps it's wings vigorously and charges for Zeke.

Zeke(Sieghart): Very Interesting, the Lord Of Valhalla him self has come to kill me, unfortunately I can't allow that so I'll get rid of you as fast as I can. -waits or the demon to get closer-

As the demon gets closer to Zeke, Magnus Dan passes out and the demon stops in it's track and returns to it's world.

Zeke(Sieghart): Huh? What happen? - Looks where Dan was standing and see's Ryan lying on the ground - Heh, I guess I gotta do the nice thing and bring him to his friends – walks over to Ryan, picks him up and walks to his cabin and lies him on the bed -... *Yawns* I can use a nap too – gets into Lass' bed and falls asleep -


THE END
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Post by janiekenzu Wed Oct 20, 2010 7:48 pm

give your charecters more personality. like a pimp arme. or a wood humping ryan
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Post by TheBlackMoon Wed Oct 20, 2010 8:49 pm

Lol ok, but u liked it rite? Very Happy
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Post by janiekenzu Thu Oct 21, 2010 5:04 pm

Eh, its good. ii think the writting needs better vocabulary. it sounds kinda cheesy the way you write things
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Post by TheBlackMoon Thu Oct 21, 2010 8:12 pm

Mkay, i'll try to use better words and not so simple ones
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